She strikes
Against this morning mountain
this pale peak
(You turn to speak)
She welcomes
This webbed well wisher
This king kastle
(Your hastle)
She turns to amped aversion
to battered brown-
(She turns around.)














Comments
Extremely powerful impact from the beginning that slowly lets the reader go as it is read completely.
--
Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most.
==Mark Twain
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